ForsakenAngel

I chose that it was recommended to me, but only because I didn't see the option to choose "because the cover looks cool" xD

Hi there, Shadow here. First, this is a rather good poem (if that's what you want to call it). Second, I agree with Nate about the contrast. It doesn't make ...

This is me, as you can see. I look horrible, but my editing is awesome(: the quote at the bottom is from a song by Cady Groves called, you guessed ...

Hi there, Shadow here. This is really amazing. I liked it! Though I haven't read the first part of it, I'm sure it is really great as well. ~Forsakinshadow~

Hi there, Shadow here. Well, first of all, I love how it's short and sweet. It's romantic, and sort of cute in a way. My favorite part: Simple love to ...

Hi there, Shadow here. First off, this is really nice. 'Like'. I agree with Busheldood, the flow is really nice and the topic is amazing. As well as Busheldood, I ...

Hi, Shadow here. Wow, I like this, I really do. I admit, I'm not sure what the first word means, or what it is, but I might just be ignorant. ...

Hi there, Shadow here. First off, I agree with Idraax about that line. It doesn't make much since to me and it only confused me. I think my favourite part ...

Hi, Shadow here. Just one thing to say about this. I'll spoiler it. Wow! This is simply amazing. You have a unique way of writing and I do believe this ...

Hi, Shadow here. First, I agree with Idraax about the word "thru". It would make your writing seem more mature, not like a 13 year old wrote it, but like ...

Thank you. One thing though, Earendil. In poetry, there are a lot less detail that regular writing. Poetry is mostly for the mind to enterpret, which is why it lacks ...

I do believe this one is a bit better than the other one! I didn't see so many mistakes this time. But one thing that is still the same: Detail. ...

Hi, Sakin here as you asked. I'm going to take this piece by piece, ok? First, this is a really good piece. Second, I noticed there was no title, why ...

Sorry about that, fixed it! It was a typo. ~Forsakinshadow~

Well thank you! And I don't mind if you want to join, as long as you can keep up! ~Forsakinshadow~