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I read it. Thanks! I agree that the second half of this chapter isn't up to par with the first half. It seems that everyone who reads this says the ...

I read both. Thank you Rach for this: Think of the character's heartbeat as the metronome for your story. Thank you Djinn for this: the text bored me at first ...

I read it. Yeah, I know. This was my way of cutting the story short. Stay posted for the first chapter of Endless Fantasy, probably in a week or so.

I read it. Thank you for the input and encouragement throughout your review. Every little bit helps when it comes to writing. Being a homeschooler, I am taught constantly about ...

Done.

I read it. Thanks for the review! I'll change it now...

I read it, Lava. Thank you for the insight; thank you for the review. I'm not sure if I want to make this longer, because it truly is a short ...

I read it, Lava. I see what you're saying. Would you have gone over Chapter One if it were split up? Because, Chapter One is probably the most crucial segment ...

I read both of your comments. HAHAHAHAHAHA! I wrote this a year ago, and I know it's a little elementary- I've grown a lot as a writer since then. If ...

I read it. Every word dragged me into the story. I felt like it had a nice feel to it. Good job!

I read it. The characters are very bland, but I love your writing style :)

@Jelly, I read it. I realize what you're saying; I'm gonna extend it, perhaps even into two chapters, but we'll see. Any suggestions on what type of descriptions would be ...

I read every little bit of what you said. Everything you've made commented is great, and I'm learning alot from you! Thank you so much for talking about Adara's character- ...

I read your review. Thanks a lot for that, blacksheep! Every comment you made was helpful and instructive. I'm especially glad that you interpreted the prologue well, catching on to ...

I read your review. So much good input! I agree with both you and Grandison that Jonah's love for Adara came way too fast. Also, I do realize the info-dump ...