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Re: Deceitful Intent Chapter 6
I read it. To be honest, I don't think I'd be allowed by my parents to read this... maybe I'm sheltered or something, lol. In other words, this contained a ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Jonah In the Night- Chapter Two
I read it. Thank you for the input and encouragement throughout your review. Every little bit helps when it comes to writing. Being a homeschooler, I am taught constantly about ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Jonah In the Night- Chapter Three
Done.
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Jonah In the Night- Chapter Three
I read it. Thanks for the review! I'll change it now...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: The Legend of the White Dragon- Part One
I read it. Your prose is superb! Not gonna lie, though, this felt a lot like a preface. A preface, by definition, is "an introduction to a book, typically stating ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Deceitful Intent Chapter 5
I read it. And, it's awesome, because I'm starting to realize the organization you have. Each chapter conveys a distinct and important message. In this segment, it seems like Vivian ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Jonah In the Night- Chapter Three
I read it, Lava. Thank you for the insight; thank you for the review. I'm not sure if I want to make this longer, because it truly is a short ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Jonah In the Night- Chapter Two
I read it, Lava. I see what you're saying. Would you have gone over Chapter One if it were split up? Because, Chapter One is probably the most crucial segment ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Jonah In the Night- Chapter Three
Hello. Please read Prologue-Chapter Two before hitting this segment. Review honestly, because herein lies the twist. Chapter Three. I forgot A stark buzz greeted my ears. In a sea of ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Because I'm a Christian
I read it. Actually, I don't have much time because I'm away from my computer and using my Dad's iPad, so my response won't be as up to par as ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Deceitful Intent Chapter 4
I read it. It was entertaining once more! The characters are growing on me, although I'm starting to think that Evan is more outgoing than I thought. No nitpicks. Be ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: TRAPPERS
I read both of your comments. HAHAHAHAHAHA! I wrote this a year ago, and I know it's a little elementary- I've grown a lot as a writer since then. If ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Cataclysm Chronicles: Prologue The Fourth
I read it. And I thought it was good; it had a very fantasy feel to it. I'm not sure what it is, but there's a missing element... hmmm, let's ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Flight 764-Chapter 1
I read it. Every word dragged me into the story. I felt like it had a nice feel to it. Good job!
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Touch of Death Chapter 1
I read it. The characters are very bland, but I love your writing style :)
Apr 30, 2011