Formslipper

I read it. Wow, I read it. It was really great, dude (or dudette), simply because of the genius character and your supreme intelligence/vocabulary. However, at times, I found this ...

You're pretty great! This is a cool poem, and really connected to me. All the neatest people in the world are bottled up inside- introverted, sad, creative. You are someone ...

I thought this was entertaining and deep. The imagery in it was apparent, as were the messages the imagery contained. A flame too bright for me to see, It lights ...

Hey there to those of you who've read Epoch 2 and were horrified . Haha, this is for you! And for those of you viewing this now who didn't see ...

Too true. I've always thought this and never really had to realize it. Reality is a tormentingly amazing thing. For this, you get followed. BTW, I reported your review to ...

Hey there, whoever posted this! Nice job; great connection! Listen up, though. I love the Lord with my whole being, and I love to proclaim his salvation, but I strongly ...

I read it. Thanks! I agree that the second half of this chapter isn't up to par with the first half. It seems that everyone who reads this says the ...

I read it. These sods are wrong in thinking this is creepy. All being said, it was amazing and heartfelt, so much beyond the petty writing that is prevalent on ...

The only problem I would ever have with long chapters is if they impose too much information on the reader. I like starting simple, then working up to greater complexity, ...

I read it because 1.1 was very good. This, of course, matched 1.1, if not surpassed it. I don't have much else to say, except it seems that you're a ...

I read it. Everything seemed to work smoothly, pace-wise and development-wise. However, the setting is very fishy to the reader. Everything is a mystery, because you didn't take the time ...

Here I am again, guys. It's short, I know, but only because it is a small frame of time in which something relatively important happens. Knock yourselves out. Epoch 2 ...

I read both. Thank you Rach for this: Think of the character's heartbeat as the metronome for your story. Thank you Djinn for this: the text bored me at first ...

To all who read my short-lived piece "Jonah In the Night", I'm sorry for cutting it short. General Fiction just isn't adventurous enough for me! Endless Fantasy, though, is my ...

I read it. Yeah, I know. This was my way of cutting the story short. Stay posted for the first chapter of Endless Fantasy, probably in a week or so.