Formslipper

Go to North Korea. Go to China. Go to Kenya. Got to Germany- Heil Hitler!!!!!!!!!! Nah... Just stay here, in the land of the free and the home of the ...

I read it. First off, I'm not a poet. But if I had this piece as my own, I'd be very proud! However, I somewhat disagree with your message. While ...

I read a lot of it. I think that afternoon makes me a little overly critical or something, because I'm not warming up well to this segment. I'll try reviewing ...

I read it, and good job! I saw Chapter Nine posted, but didn't want to start with Chapter Nine, so I'll start here. First impression: lukewarm. In other words, the ...

Oh, the intensity with which my hatred burns, If only it’d (what?) light you on fire – I’d watch with glee Flames consuming your dreaded self (the flames consume math's ...

I read it. Although I don't know much about poetry, I could still tell that everything flowed well and had intrinsic meaning. Keep it up! Oh yeah, and that was ...

Thank you for the input! It's greatly appreciated. I admit that I'm ad libbing a bit with this story. In other words, I'm not using any form of outline (which ...

I read it, and loved it. Great job, and keep going!

This is not an essay; this is a soliloquy, or free-roam of thought. I'm trying to "break the chains of reason." You don't have to do this with me if ...

I think you just took my innocence. jk Anyway: awesome, horrible story. I lovingly hated every word of it. :(

I read it, and was stunned by how well I was able to keep my attention. The usual "mysterious" works on this site tend to be cheesy and random, but ...

Sorry it took me so long. :/ I've been a lazy writer lately, but I finally cracked down and cranked it out. Hope you either love it or hate it! ...

I read it. And haha, is this a comedy act? Anyway, I'm home-schooled, so I wouldn't know if the schools are bad. Mine certainly isn't!

I read it. And it was good- very good. I hope to reach your calibre of prose someday, or even surpass it. Everything flowed well, and seemed to pull me ...

I read it. All was well and good throughout the whole thing, and it was nice to read a steady, maturely-written piece. From writing, I've realized that readers- no matter ...