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Re: Careless, Dreamy
I was thinking today, If I had to marry right now- as in, right away- and if I had a million girls to choose from, who would it be? What ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Inure to Time
What if Time had a friend? Who would this person be? What would he do when Time died? Waking, he finds that stars are spots- - Merely pricks of light- ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Discontented
I read it, and it seemed discombobulated... :( Other than that, though, I couldn't stop reading until the end! Try to make it more coherent, but not so coherent that ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Help! Need edited by tomorrow!
There are many things I plan to accomplish this year - graduating, improving my writing skills (don't need "skills") , and enrolling in college to major in journalism are my ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 2)
I read it. At first, I was like... weird setting, weird situation... But then it kind of settled. I felt like the characters were becoming slightly more realistic. However, their ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: The Evil Sprite
I was inspired the other day by someone asking, "Why did God allow evil into the world?" It's a funny question- naive, even. Use this poem to reflect on the ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Carnival Rides
I read it, and enjoyed the humor. As for symbolism, I have not a clue =) It possesses a nature somewhat beyond my understanding, especially some of the parts about ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Licking Dew
Writers are artists, and artists are strangely sensitive people. They're like petals. They react emotionally to things that should cause them to be amused. Ponder on every word, and try ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: G-d's Ways
I read it, and actually thought it was funny. Not that I disrespect it, but rather that it possesses a profound sort of humor that you may not be aware ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Odd Question...
I read an article about expert clowns being able to fit around twenty people in a regular-sized passenger car, but that may not relate to the reason you're asking. Check ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1)
I read it, Skins! And it was an easygoing read. All of the emotions came naturally, which is something I normally struggle with, so props there. Sentence structure, grammar, etc. ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: The Town
This was spontaneous. I fancy that there's a bit of symbolism tucked away in this piece somewhere, but who knows? *** The wind is chill at this time of day, ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Are you writing a novel?
I've started an ad lib (non outline/freeform) novel titled Endless Fantasy. I'll probably change the title once I've finished it. My goal is to write five pages of Endless Fantasy ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Why are we here?
I read it. They're good points, skwaag, if all (everything and the universe) is for moot. I hate to say it, but it's not, hence the existence of existence (woah). ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: John
"Clean up crew" That really got me laughing! I thought that it was clever, and might even have a message at the end. Who knows? Anyway, good job, and nice ...
Jul 6, 2011
