Formslipper

I read it, and thought it was very quaint, certainly simple enough for me to wrap my head around, which is always a good thing. At some points, however, I ...

I read it. There doesn't seem to be very much to say regarding flaws; there are none as far as I can tell. Instead of any glaring weaknesses, I'd say ...

I read it, and thought it was very nice. Your poem does a good job of keeping pace with the reader's impressions... In other words, your lines of imagery were ...

I was in a dull mood when I wrote this. There's a loose parallelism between the stanzas regarding plainness and blunt connections, if you're into that sort of thing. tough ...

I read it, and thought it was meh. I'm really not sure what this is supposed to be. You're writing as if you're conversing, which adds no depth to what ...

I read it, and identified completely with it. I hate petty conversation, small talk- you called it "transient"... which is so true! I'm an introvert as well ;) But don't ...

I read it. Beginning to end, it was beautiful. I felt as if it spoke to me; it was almost as if it expressed my feelings for me. Very laid ...

This was straight out of my gut. I'm sure a lot of writers feel like this sometimes. You may see a trace of my past in this. I feel contrived ...

I read it. This is a difficult poem to decipher, but it's imagery was acute. If you keep this kind of writing up, then you're sure to be noticed, and ...

I read it. First off- I'll have you know that I'm a Christian, too. You probably come from a household that stresses purity, etc. So do I. That must have ...

I read it. It was darkly entertaining. Somehow, on the other side of things (the alternate and less poignant version of the Professor), I found that there was a bit ...

A simpler, dearer poem. It's all about wanting to cry, and trying to understand somebody. So, here you go. Let me feel your pulse, Your watery, thrumming throb, That angelic, ...

I wondered if my imagination could hold a visitor. My corner is dark, dreary, Foreign to young girl- that visitor, She couldn't understand this, Go away: Magenta says deep sands, ...

I read it, and thought it strangely satisfying. Somehow, you managed to create a meaningful jumble of words, which I could never do. As for all your spoiled questions, I ...

I read it. This is a bit lofty- if not, too much altogether for a modern reader to enjoy. But I thought it was very thoughtful. My only criticism is ...