Formslipper

I read it. Good job, and -hmmm- Shawn is very cynical, moody, and crass. It makes me wonder, "Will this person's incessant cussing and bleak outlook on life be explained ...

I read some of it, kjr5horses. In one of your replies to this, you mentioned having written 55 pages in 4 weeks- WOW! How the heck did you do that?! ...

What's with your " Uh ok^^^ " ridicule? Don't you respect my opinion? Soulkana, I took my time to read what you wrote, and I carefully thought through a good ...

I read it. This work is good, but you should go over it with precision to fix a lot of its sentence structure. You had several fragments like this: Watched ...

Can I admit that I found this disturbing? I mean- a girl who "goes into fits" that make her cut herself, and who sees numbers over peoples' heads that tell ...

I can't believe I'm saying this to someone my own age, but... that was amazing! I'm terribly jealous of your incredible gift. From the moment it began, everything- the characters, ...

I read the first half of this. To be honest, it's so forthcoming (elegant descriptions, bold characters, stately settings, etc.) However, your robust descriptions and plot-lines contrast directly with

What a great story! I thought it flowed well, so no comments there. It was also entertaining. My definition of entertainment is, "The length of time till I'm bored." And ...

Hello writers, I composed this work spontaneously, and want to have my writing style criticized. Please be honest about things you like or hate about my prose. Try to refrain ...

Hey writer, This is a good work, and I enjoyed it. However, you seem to have a problem with making items, places, and people truly significant to the protagonist. For ...

I read your first chapter and thought it was unique, but I think your plot could use something a bit deeper that makes me really care about your characters more. ...