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I LOVE IT!! Now I have a very good idea what the school should be like. But, I don't know. Maybe mine would have just a little more freedom. I ...

Ashton reached for her, pulling her into his arms, holding her close and whispering into her ear, “Your mine and I won’t ever let you go again.” Sapphire smiled at ...

Hey, Your writing is good. A little crude at times, but that only shocked me because it started off so different. I don't have a problem with it. The voice ...

I don't think it is natural to be able to write something every single day. I know that when I was a little younger, I used to try too much ...

Hey, I have to say, it sounds like it could be an interesting story. There are some grammar mistakes though, even though I know it is only a prologue. Only ...

Hello, I'm not really into poems and whatnot, but I thought "Why not?" when I saw the heading. I did enjoy reading it too, so I'm glad I took the ...

First off... I like it :) I'm not really into poetry but I think you just changed my mind. For this piece anyway. You don't give too much away, which ...

Hello, I felt that the poem didn't really... flow? It felt a bit forced. Or something along those lines. The part that really caught my attention and when my interest ...

Hello, I wouldn't exactly say that I liked it, but mainly thats just the content. It doesn't appeal to my preferences but I'm sure others would love it. You show ...

Hello, Your writing is fairly good. But the dialog part of it, does indeed sound very childish. Not very sophisticated and doesn't really fit in with the story. Maybe you ...

Every person is capable of murder, whether they believe so or not. The only factor that changes is whether we nurture that evil inside us that makes us capable of ...

Hey, For someone with dyslexia, you did pretty well in my opinion. Sure, maybe some touch ups here and there could make it really really good. But as you said, ...

Hello, You really do give definition to the phrase "short but sweet". I liked it, the way it portrayed her emotions, it is really evident. Maybe there could have been ...

Hello, To tell the truth, I didn't really understand that concept of the story until I read other peoples comments. But now that I have I sort of get the ...

Hello, For the most part, I really did enjoy your writing. It was hard to understand at first, I had no clue what it was about but after a couple ...