ForeverRun

Thanks, for the review! I think everyone has pointed out the rhymes, so enough said about that. I'll keep everyone's input on that for my next poem. About the moonlight ...

So this is actually my first work, and thank you for your review. I'm new here too, and also clueless. But anyway, I agree on the rhyming, and you're one ...

Yeah, the rhyming is a little forced, I agree. I had it in stanzas, but then the publisher thing murdered them so, all well.

Thanks for the input! This was a bit of a rushed write, and I kind of didn't put as much thought as I probably should've into the sentence thing. Also ...

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I really like this story. I can't wait for more. There aren't any obvious problems, still there are a few things that don't entirely sit well. Ryouma is set to ...

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I really like this story. I can't wait for more. There aren't any obvious problems, still there are a few things that don't entirely sit well. Ryouma is set to ...

This is a great story, I really like the characters and the setting. I can't wait to read more. However, I was a little confused when There was a jump ...

This is really great so far. I can't wait for more. I would really like to know more about how homeschooling affected Sybil's development though. It seems to me like ...