Forestqueen808

It's definitely interesting and I really want to read more. I only saw a few grammatical errors that I saw. I would like to know more about the doctor and ...

Wow. I really liked that. It really hit home for me. It was very well written and really want to read more lyrics from you! Keep on writing them songs!

Okay I'm not too good with lyrics but here is one I just jotted down. Enjoy! Verse 1 *piano plays softly* The moment seemed so right You walking by my ...

Yay! Another lyric post by you! haha anyway. I only saw a few errors and really liked it! I've felt like that before and I know I've written thousands of ...

That was really interesting. I'm excited for the next parts. Only a couple things. You kept doing this ." and then starting without a capital letter! You should put a ...

Was that supposed to be a short story? I personally would have liked it better if it had been like a novel. It would be interesting to learn more about ...

Here is the first chapter of Deep Wounds I wrote a prologue first so be sure to read that! Thank you! Chapter 1 I stand on the sidewalk scrunching my ...

Wow. That was really good. I could really feel the character hating the gaze of everyone in the room and that he or she was so confused. It sounded a ...

Wow! I really loved that! Well I love anything supernatural so that may explain it...but that's not the point! You really made the characters how I expected them to be ...

I really liked this. I could really feel the character's fear and emotion. There was once where you put on instead of one, which i don't think you meant to ...

Okay this is kinda supposed to be country does it sound like it? I'm not quite sure! But the words just came to me so hopefully its good! *a quiet ...

Airborn by...i forget

*begins with whispers* She can't even see herself Did you hear she cuts herself Did you hear she made out with that guy I heard she screwed- *Interrupted by a ...

Wow! I really loved that! I mean everyone thinks, oh I'd rock at swordfighting, it can't be that hard! But it probably is! And you're writing really shows that. I'm ...

Wow. That was really deep and I could hear the music in my head. It really hit me hard because I know some people who do drugs and stuff. I ...