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Re: I Don't Need You
I liked it. It really hit the spot for me. It was short but really good. I hope you keep on writing lyrics, because it was really good. I was ...
Oct 2, 2009 -
Re: Loss/ Grandmother
Wow. That was really deep, and I liked it. I can relate to it. Its like when I lost my grandpa...I felt the same way. I didn't find many errors ...
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: The Wall
This was really interesting. I definetly didn't stray away and think about other things while reading this. I didn't notice any grammatical errors really, maybe one or two. I loved ...
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: deleated
I really liked this. It was interesting how you did Feel the Music. It just seemed different and I kinda liked it. I think you could have organized it into ...
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: Adventures with Captain Kirk (Chapter 2)
I need a series name, since there will be more stars and fictional characters from movies in other books. Anyway, PM me if you think of one! Here’s the second ...
Sep 28, 2009 -
Re: deleated
It was really interesting. It kinda made me think about guys really CAN be picky. But girls can be picky as well. It was very interesting. I know I talk ...
Sep 28, 2009 -
Re: Beginning to my story
Its a great storyline and I only saw a few grammatical errors. I'm really interested in the next parts. Its great build up and I'm really really excited. Maybe you ...
Sep 28, 2009 -
Re: Secrett Seregreen
Wow that's cool! She looks like I probably will imagine her!
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: Adventures with Captain Kirk (Chapter 1)
This is a really cheesy story I wanted to write. This is practically fan fiction so I was like, Okay then! Yay! Hope you enjoy. If you like Star Trek ...
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: Seeking Attention Part 1
I really like it. I love how she's a ghost and like she's drawn to him. They don't seem exactly like the traditional ghosts either. I love how you can ...
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: Love, Death, and War
It was really good! I liked it! It was very emotional but it was amazing!
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: Look Left- Chapter 1
So I don't quite get it. How did she not know Mitchie was dead? Did they always say she was traveling through Europe? I was kinda confused. So Java is ...
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: Captive *Prologue*
Hey. This is a story based on a script I started writing a couple years ago. It's kinda gory later and it has historical fiction and horror in it so ...
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: The Angel Of Adrenaline Rap
Wow. I really liked that. I'm all into screamo and heavy metal so it really appealed to me. If I could have changed anything, I think since we're all writers ...
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: A Cutter's Lullaby
I really liked it. I think about when I used to cut myself and this poem made me cry. It really brings out the emotion and everything. It was really ...
Sep 27, 2009
