Forestqueen808

I really liked that! It was really well written. I want to read more of your poems because this was amazing! I loved it! It really hit the spot for ...

Wow. I really like your work. This was a poem I really wanted to read slowly and I could feel the character's emotion. I love how you described how love ...

Here’s the third chapter! I hope you enjoy! *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Chapter 3 Emily and Denise couldn’t get to sleep that night. “Denise? Why do you think the captain was so worried ...

I really liked that. It rhymed well, and really made me think. I can definitely relate to that. I didn't see any grammatical errors, and I was glad it was ...

Wow. That was amazing! I'm a big fan of fantasy so I was really excited with this! Only on grammatical error I saw was you put "pored" I think you ...

I loved that! I could relate to that, and it really struck home. I only saw one mistake and it was you put " realised" and I think it should ...

Wow. That was really well written. I actually enjoyed reading it! It really turned my blood to ice, and it made me sad, but it is true. I only saw ...

This is my first story book so here is my profile Name: Age: 13 Gender: Female Appearance: Dirty blond hair in layers, blue green eyes, thin, tan, athletic Personality:Is a ...

I found a few grammatical errors, but not a lot. It was interesting to hear the story. And I liked how you put the old man is telling the story. ...

It was really short, to be sure, but I liked it. It really wasn't too descriptive, but thats good. You don't want the reader to be overwhelmed with description. And ...

I really like the suspense you're building up. But I think that you could possibly have written the hook better too. Did you even really need a prolouge? Was it ...

Wow. That really hit home for me. I could never stop loving this guy over and over again last year. Even though he wasn't the best for me. It was ...

That was awesome! I liked how it showed pics and quotes. They really matched each other. I really liked them!

How could you say that wasn't good? I liked it! It talked about the senses very well. I loved how it was descriptive, but not overly descripted. You know? It ...

Wow. I am sooo excited for the next chapter!!! Yay!!! It was really good. I'm so interested in the facebook thing and why all this happened. It's really awesome. One ...