Forestqueen808

Wow I really really liked that. I could tell it was written with emotion. I love these heart ache lyrics/poems. This one was especially nice, since there was a lot ...

OHMYGOSH!!!!!!! That made me laugh so hard!!! I was like dying and my mom came in and had to read it. (She also nearly died by the way!) I am ...

If you were mine I would love you more than you could ever dream of If you were mine I would hold you in my arms in the night If ...

Ember "No!" Ember whispered. She could feel heat rising in her body. Something was making her mad, and was controlling her. "Please no...I don't want to hurt anyone! please..." she ...

Ember I felt a weird sensation in my mind. I couldn't understand the feeling. "Fire..." I whispered, without telling myself to. It was almost as if...someone else was controlling my ...

Wow...that was amazing! I saw the title and was like...this is gonna be weird...but it wasn't! It made me think about all the little things that bring back memories...like dried ...

I am so freaking out!!! I thought I had all my stuff worked out...but suddenly I have new ideas!!! AGH!!!! But my characters I don't know too well! So its ...

Ember I tossed and turned. There was something unnatural in the night, and I had suddenly woken up. I kept feeling a prescence, it seemed so near. The dreams of ...

Michael "You know you shoudl be more careful when you're um....roof jumping..." she laughed. "Yeah, well you better get used to a girl landing outside on the wet grass," I ...

She was so young, but so sick She was beautiful, with her auburn hair and blue eyes But everything was wrong She had met him, and he had brought light ...

That was interesting. I guess I'd have to read your story to get it. I could kind of feel what the character was feeling though. You think someone's the one, ...

NO! YOu guys, we need to post, seriously this was a good one!!!!!!

Hi, I think this is going a little too fast. How can she be falling for him already? its kinda...um iffy. and also, you need to show not tell. Talk ...

Its really cute. I love Zelda, and it is so awesome...but are her and Link getting married? Did I miss something??? anyways, but it is simple, and that is good. ...

Tala, I put one of your guys in for Ember