Forestqueen808

Hi! I really liked this piece I only saw one thing that really bugged me! And other I will fall! I think you mean, "And another I'll fall!" or something ...

Tiger!!! My tiger buddy...I shall review this poem! To the day in the night When a heart beats in fright And you lay down your head Nuzzle the pillow on ...

Hi its me Forest! I'll be your reviewer today! Chained to the fear that has kept you in the same spot for so long I think since it's a poem ...

I was searching through my computer and found this from about a year ago...enjoy! If a day could last years, it wouldn’t be a day If all light was taken ...

Sorry about that JD! My spell check on Microsoft Word is broken on my yeah maybe I should just to spell check on here first.

Hi! I'll be your reviewer today! Colors brighten earths surface, Cascades of green cover hillsides. Who are we to take away from life's simple pleasures? I like this, it really ...

Spree I groaned as I rolled over into a trash can. I had been sleeping on the wet ground, don't ask me why I didn't sleep in an abandoned house. ...

This is for Maki Chan's contest and I may make some more changes so reviews would be helpful! I breathed in the scent of a crisp cold winter morning. My ...

Hi Aqua! Like I promised...I'm reviewing! It was that time when we went fishing, I think it should be: It was about that he time when we went fishing, You ...

Name(keep it tasteful): Bryanna (but goes be Spree) Age(vampires do not die unless destroyed by setting on fire with a special kind of liquid so it can really me anywhere ...

Wow, that was really good Tariq! It totally made me think of what I was doing. Am I trying to grow up too fast? Why should I be? Thank you ...

Hi! Sorry it took me so long to review it for you! It was my contest...sorry anyways. I was listening to the song when I read this. It made me ...

Hi its me Forest! I'll be your reviewer today! The clock that hung in the hallways claimed it was nearing 8:34 pm. I think you mean hallway...singular. And it looks ...

Chapter 1 “Hey, Rachel.” I heard a voice behind me say. I stiffened and slowly closed the ugly green locker in front of me. I turned around and stared into ...

Hey Pudin! Its Forest, and I will be your reviewer for today! My friend, my dear friend, do you remember that day? the day I first met you the first ...