Forestqueen808

Well Irish- It seems like you got some reviews so I'm gonna just comment. This was awesome and I had actually just turned on So Cold by Breaking Benjamin right ...

Hi! I'm Forest and I will review your work today! I didn't see anything to correct, which made me mad! (No offense!) I really liked this poem, especially the last ...

Kamas I love these photos! I think the Fat Squirrel is my favorite though! Haha I hope to see more of those potato chip squirrels! Haha!

Hi EmmaLee! Its my turn to review yours now! word would leap I think you should put "will" instead of would, since your story is present tense...well essay. That was ...

Tears are warm and fresh But you don't see them You can't even see Your own selfish, cold heart My hands shake uncontrollably But you don't feel me You can't ...

This is in honor of December 7th, Pearl Harbor Day and all the men who died in the bombing Brave men died Without a saying a proper goodbye The blood ...

Name: Lisiana Dashni Age: 16 Sign: Libra (scale) Weapon: A dagger with a purple stone on the handle with the engraving of Libra Power: Lisiana can sort out small conflicts ...

Wow!!! I AM WRITING A POST IN A YEARBOOK!!! OHMYGOSH!!! Haha. Well, this has been a great year on YWS and I haven't even fully been on a year! But ...

Save a spot for LIBRA!!!!

Spree I snorted. Yeah, right 17. "Just like Edward..." she mumbled. "Yeah and no, I am not like Edward." Bells smiled. "When will you ever learn you humans? How old ...

Name: Sunlisia Age: 15 Race: Elf (unless there isn't an elf thing I'll be an Earth weird) History: She was abandoned as a baby and was taken into the elf ...

Ambrosia Ambrosia flew above the trees, watching humans at their daily work. The smell of smoke climbed into her lungs and she couldn't breathe. The humans used the power of ...

Yay! Your story will do great in the contest, this was a great ending, and I loved how I could feel the characters emotion. Great job!

I wrote this for my English class! Enjoy! I wish I could be invisible So I could not be looked down upon I wish I could shape-shift Then I could ...

“Come on, its not that big of a deal, my mom does it all the time!” My best friend Cassie looked me straight in the eyes. “But Cassie…its bad!” I ...