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Re: Irishfire
This is the poem for Irishfire since she won my contest! Enjoy! A patch of clover Wedged between two hills A four leaf clover Sitting uniquely by those with only ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Kama's Photography Exhibition - [Updated Jan 16, 2010]
Kamas, I wanted to comment on the earlier knight picture. Were you in California or Florida? There is a medieval place in each of those places, we almost went to ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Into the Depths
Hey El! I finished Part I the first night just like you said I would! Now its my turn to right a long review for you! Prolouge The Raid “We ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: Snowcovered amazingland (Updated 12/17)
Irish! I love this picture! It looks like an image from a Winter Wonderland. The snow is perfectly white and sitting on the branches just so. The red berries give ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: No Title yet. Just a freewrite
Mage! HI!!! I'm gonna review this real fast! I began to walking, but something was wrapped around my leg. I looked down it was a rope and it was wet. ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Into the Depths
I am reading it thoroughly El, and I love it! I'm editing it by hand so it is thorough. I have only corrected mainly grammatical errors, nothing really big so ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Recollections EDITED
Hi! Thank you all for critiquing this, I just finished editing and revising in some places that needed it. I would be grateful if you could read it again to ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Love of Words <2>
Love of Words Chapter 2 I sighed as we arrived at the dark forest green door. The white mansion seemed to loom above us and my mother knocked. A man ...
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Blood in the Sky
Spree "You are right, are you sure you don't sparkle?" Bree had a glint of amusement in her eyes, and Bells laughed. "Oh, and how is it that your name ...
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Zodiac2
Lisiana Libra I quickly scanned the park and walked slowly to a shady tree, setting down my backpack. I pulled out my black binder and flipped to the tab marking ...
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Black Tears
I liked it! But I didn't see anything that anyone else hadn't already pointed out. The ending wasn't so clear what had happened and I was kinda curious though...hmm but ...
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Me!
I took this picture one day when I was trying to take a picture of me. I thought it looked pretty good so here it is!
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Love of Words <1>
This is a story I came up with in English class and I hope it will spread out to be longer. Please tell me what you think! Love of Words ...
Dec 11, 2009 -
Re: The Curse of the Queen
Hi! I'm Forest and I will be your reviewer today! who worshiped her people very much. Do you mean: Who was worshiped by her people? It kinda confused me. One ...
Dec 11, 2009 -
Re: Before Evening Falls
This was an awesome picture! I love it! The trees are pretty and the sun is just perfect. I'm not expert photographer but I thought this was an awesome picture! ...
Dec 11, 2009
