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This is for captain.classy since she won my contest. This is for you captain! *salutes* “I’ll be your friend,” she said, That captain I met. “I’ve got your back” she ...

This is for Aqua's contest. It was for the prompt of my earliest childhood memory. I sat in the circle at my kindergarten, staring across the circle to my best ...

Hi! I'll be your reviewer for today! the mills used to cough and stutter all day long Great description here, I like it! Once upon a time tall, blackened chimneys ...

Hi! I'll be your reviewer for today! "Your such a whore" It should be: "You're such a whore" "It'll be ok dear". Should be "It'll be okay dear". and why ...

Hi! I shall be your reviewer for today! “OK,” no. Don't ever do that. Always use "okay" it bugs me the other way. Lilica has stunning, straight blond hair and ...

Wow, these were really cool! I liked them a lot and the titles fit well. My favorite is Either the first “I bless thee” or “Rainy Day” they were pretty ...

Hi I'm gonna edit this a little more okay? "So are you excited?" Amanda asked excitedly. She shook with excitement and rounded around the corner and out our door. Okay, ...

Hi Cassie! I'll be your reviewer for today! "Why are you oging that way?" This was the only mistake I found. "oging" should be "going" but I think that was ...

Hi! I'm gonna be your reviewer for today! (I like Twilight so might as well you know?) Die.Die. You need a space in between the two dies. Also, put it ...

Here is something for all you Jane Austen lovers! A modern day twisted Northanger Abbey! I sighed as I read the glorious words spoken by the glittering vampire. I laid ...

I just started reading it yesterday and am almost finished. It is very good, and I like it, I'm just wondering if anyone else has read it.

Hey A.M.! I shall be your reviewer for today! I was really excited to read this, I LOVE sci-fi and this looked interesting. “Hey, how’s it going, Lyra?” she asked, ...

Hi Tennisprincess! I'll be your reviewer for today! As a child I'd wake to crisp Canadian winters It would flow better if it was: "As a child I'd wake to ...

Haha you will be getting yours shortly captain!

Hi captain.classy! Here is your review as promised! Over my friends shoulder, It should be: Over my friend's shoulder Don't add the comma I don't think you need a pause ...