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Re: A Taint of Red (Draft 2)
Katarinna Dresner is a respectable woman of the Nazi party. Her father being an officer in the Nazi army, she is expected to follow the life style laid down before ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: The Life Of A Soldier
Drip. Rain smacked against the lanky branches of the trees. Mud encased his boots as he walked through the woods, his heart pounding in time with the rain. He held ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Scarlet Rain (excerpt)
Sir Dacron pressed his horse on through the rain. Thunder rolled ominously above them. It was not often that Dacron felt fear, but now it had wrapped its iron hand ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Please God
The snow lays like a blanket, making the trees glimmer as a small ray of sunlight peaks through the clouds. What a beautiful sight, the snow and the joy it ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: crying on the cross
This was an amazing poem. I cried the first time I've read it, you captured the beauty and the sorrow, and everything about the Savior's death. I have reread it ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: The things parents say...
*trying to help my mom pick out an outfit* Me: That one's cute. Mom: Nah... Me: No I seriously really like it. Mom: What about this one? *Dad walks in* ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
So...I got my braces off and my friends and I had a Fall photo shoot so...here is a picture of me.
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Let me Love You
Rascalover!!! Since you helped me a bunch by your review of my novel I shall review yours as best as I can! I'll try and have this done as soon ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Whenever It Rains
My heart aches The days that gray clouds appear The drops that fall from heaven Are like the tears falling down my face The glittering jewels on the branches Remind ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: A Taint Of Red (First Draft)
So, I wrote this and a lot of people on here have read it. I know I have some historical facts wrong such as dates and stuff, but I need ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Apologizing
Dear Hello Hey I'm sorry. Let's just get down to the point. I'm sorry that I fell so hard for you, and I'm sorry that I have to give you ...
Sep 28, 2010 -
Re: How?
This is a poem I wrote for my friend who recently tried to commit suicide. I would like as much feedback as possible to make it really special and amazing. ...
Sep 28, 2010 -
Re: Enemies
So this is a short story I wrote to get over my writer's block, so its probably horrible. We've been studying the history of Ancient Greece so this kinda just ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Your Favorite Dream.
My favorite dream has to be one of these two: I was in my backyard which had an ocean in it. Then I hear this song: Bubblegum, bubblegum, bubblegum for ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Its All Your Fault
My world is falling apart. And its all because of you. I don't want to love you, But I just can't stop. She knows about us, And I'm losing her. ...
Sep 7, 2010
