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Lori "I wondered when you would finally ask me..." I say quietly, gazing out over the water. I couldn't be more happy. Jordan, my boyfriend. I had nearly fainted when ...

Lori I yawn and stretch. I'm home, I had left the party after all. I guess I couldn't take seeing Jordan with Danielle. Who was I kidding? She was pretty. ...

Hey Timmy! I'll be your reviewer today! Okay, so yeah, you may want a new name. Arwen is the princess in Lord of the Rings (which I am an expert ...

Lori Ollie rushes out of the house, so do Lydia and Lance. I sigh, everyone else is leaving...maybe I should too. The night was becoming boring, and the only thing ...

Lori I look at myself in the mirror, plucking one last hair from my left eyebrow. I kiss my ring on my finger and stare back again at myself in ...

Gollum. The creature In the Misty Mountains, Who wails to be alone. He’s trapped, He’s confused, He’s selfish, He’s alone. There is a Gollum inside of us. Who is trapped ...

I love this! I absolutly love it, I think a tear just fell from my cheek. It was so sweet and just made me think. I love it, its gorgeous. ...

Hello! I'll be your reviewer for today. I didn't find any nitpicks, and I loved it. I kinda hate reviewing long things, and this was a great beginning. I love ...

Hey Kaywiia!!! When can we start??? I'm dying here!

Prologue “Are you all right?” he ran his finger against her bare arm. Her blue silk sleeve hung at her wrist now, and she turned her face away from his ...

Name: Lauren (Lori) Jenkins Gender: Female Age: 17 Grade: 11th Junior Picture: Personality: Lori is one of those girls who are nice and soon go into the popular crowd, though ...

I love this! It was a new take on the joker's past, espeically how he was smiling...wow it made me think...oh wow, but it was amazing though creepy...but the joker ...

Two words. Keep writing!!! I totally love this, I am a big fan of the joker, he's the only reason I stayed awake in the Dark Knight! And thats why ...

"Look at me when I'm talking to you!" The blow hit me from behind, knocking me onto the sidewalk. Tears rolled down my face as I looked at my scraped ...

Hi Layla! I'm here to review your story and I'm gonna do it in a pretty pretty purple why? Because, I can. :elephant: Ugh, why do I have first period ...