Forestqueen808

I can't help but breathe a sigh And think of all the lies Whenever I hear your name All it brings is pain My phone has stopped ringing, But I ...

The Past A word to reflect what has happened The past to me is that night you held me That night you told me everything would be okay The night ...

This is about my boyfriend who will be moving soon.... I really want to give it to him before he leaves. So rip it apart! (: It has to be ...

You absolutely must write this! Its so true I feel like. I mean, sometimes my friends look at my differently when I bring things up about writing. This is amazing! ...

Do you remember Those long nights We spent underneath the stars Listening, talking, wishing, waiting? Do you remember The day so long ago That you held me in your arms ...

Hey! I'll review this As Wicked said above, its just a snippet, but its purely dialogue and does not give us any sense of the story. I really would like ...

I like it!!!

Hello NewHero! So, when I read this, I realized that it had a lot of feeling in it, and it probably means a lot to you correct? Well, I thought ...

This was one word: Amazing. It nearly brought me to tears because I have had the same kind of experience. All through seventh grade me and this boy were best ...

His eyes so kind His laugh so warm Why can’t I get him off my mind? Him and I Oh that moment seemed so right The moment that we were ...

A soft, haunting melody Ringing through a darkened room A hand on my waist Our fingers entwined A silent but drumming heartbeat Echoing in my flushed ears A finger tracing ...

I personally think its totally ridiculous. I doubt a lot of people are going to fly unless they really want to be touched. Its nasty and unfair. We deserve to ...

Hello there! I'll be your reviewer for today. Okay, so I didn't see any nitpicks. You did an awesome job describing, but sometimes you needed a little more. Especially near ...

Hello meggwriting! I'll be your reviewer for today. Alright, so I know that many of the grammer problems were supposed to be there. It was very effective that you made ...

I Capture The Castle was pretty good and Angels and Demons as well. Same with Little Women. But Ella Enchanted? Really? That sucked in my opinion to the book...ruined my ...