Forestqueen808

Hey! Great writing, this seems like an interesting story and I hope to read more. I also liked the way you did the dialouge, I could tell you did that ...

Hello Warrior Princess! I'll be your reviuewer for today! Well, you've got a nice set of Haikus here. Throughout them, you have great imagery and rythm. I love how you ...

Lilly, soon to be Nancy I walked into the office slowly. I wore my normal skinny jeans and a tank top, and I was nervous. What if I had to ...

Jack Smith I looked at the girl who walked into my office, raising an eyebrow. No wonder this girl wanted a new life. If you were her, you would want ...

Jack, President of Turn Around Co. I sighed, picking up the phone and glancing at the clock. It had been a long day, and since the company had just gotten ...

Name: Lilly Smith Gender: Female Age: 15 Appearance: Likes/Dislikes: Monster Energy Drinks, guys, cookies. She hates drama queens, her dad, her ex boyfriend. History: She's labeled as the school slut,

Yes, its in the Mountain West So far away from the cool ocean mist But who needs that, When you've got Idaho? Idaho The land of Syringas The beautiful, white ...

He was the one I felt it in my heart The day he told me he loved me The first day he held me in his arms I can remember ...

Hello I'll be your reviewer for today! Oh and Welcome to YWS! OKay, so I'm not much of a critiquer on poems, but this was pretty good. Do you write ...

Okay, so I am like, no good giving tips on poetry, but I have to say, that this is full of emotion. Your comparisons are good, and you really give ...

Emma It was all so cold, and so blurry. I could feel bodies all around me, but no heat was flowing to me. "What's going to happen to us?" I ...

Name: Jack Smith Gender: Male Age: 32 Appearance: Likes/Dislikes: He likes: Money, women, his job, oh and the occasional beer. He dislikes: People who call and don't set up an ...

Plot: Do you love your life? Or are you sick of it? Or maybe, you want more. With this new company, you can have any life you want. Trade in ...

Name: Ashton Davidson Gender: Male Age (5-25): 14 Personality: Ashton is a nice boy, no one would ever think he would be a bad kid. He is nice, and a ...

Name: Emma Jackson Gender: Female Age (15-18): 15 Personality: One word can describe Emma: fiesty. She is brave, saucy, and will do anything to protect hers and other people's rights. ...