Forestqueen808

-Name: Lisiana Smith -Age: 17 -Gender: Female -Appearance: -Personality: She has a firey temper and she is very protective, at least on the outside. Inside she is crying, but she ...

Chapter 3 “That’s horrible!” Liesle exclaimed, dragging Grammy from her recollections. “Why didn’t you stop them?” Grammy just chuckled. “No one dared to argue with the Nazis, even if he

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I tapped my pencil against the desk. I slowly scribbled in answers to my test, only to erase them again. I had studied, but I hadn’t been concentrating. I had ...

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Okay, so how many of you...have ever had to kill of those beloved characters? How many of you cry? How many...well...How many feel like you lose a best friend? I ...

Chapter 1 The wrinkles on the woman’s face showed more than they had in years. It was her ninety-fifth birthday, but her bright blue eyes shown just as bright as ...

Would you please review the first chapter of my WWII Historical Fiction novel?

Okay, so I started writing a WWII historical fiction novel. I need to know what people think. I have an idea for switching some stuff around, but I need to ...

Okay, so I had an idea to write about World War II. Amazing right? Okay, but I need to know more about what happened to the Jews before they were ...

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Okay, so this summer I have a goal to read a lot of classics. What are some good ones for people my age that aren't too gory or have too ...

Four girls, Lilly, Ember, Brooke, and Crystal meet at a summer camp. Soon after, they are seperated from their campmates in the wilderness. Each begin to have strange dreams, and ...