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Re: A Taint of Red(2).Chapter One
Well its been a while since I've been on, and I've finally gotten back to rewriting my novel. I know all the grammatical errors in this, but I seriously want ...
Dec 26, 2011 -
Re: A Merry Christmas
A Merry Christmas Snow begins to enfold us As it drifts from the sky, Cloaking the browned grass. We sit on the porch, Sipping the thick, Steaming cocoa, Laughter filling ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Tess of the D'Urbervilles
So I just recently finished my new favorite book Tess of the D'Urbervilles. For those of you who read it, I really really want to know! What would you have ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mason
Dear Mason, I never want to see you again. When I say that, I don't mean it as if I hate you, because I don't. You're a wonderful person, well, ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Little Tommy and the Red Coats Preface/Chapter 1
Preface Grace and I Have been heaven blessed With a little Tommy too. We fear his life span will be very short, For at the age of Sixteen years and ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Sydney
Hey there! This is a beautiful poem. I'm not a poetic expert...trust me. I didn't really find anything bad about it. I seriously thought it was gorgeous. Geez I wish ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: The Children's Crusade Chapters 1
Chapter One A fresh, cool wind brushed a sweaty strand of dark hair from Andre’s face as he hunched over, planting the seeds with care. He glanced up at the ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: The Daily Routine
She closes her eyes And begins her routine. The makeup goes on the eyelids The bow in her hair. She slips on her sweater, And plasters on a fake smile. ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Phases of Love
The Feeling of Summer A tingling sensation ran up my spine As he pulled me into his arms for a dance The gentle melody making us sway. My heart drummed ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Hypnotizing
I look at you, Your shining blue eyes, Your perfect smile, Holding me under your spell. I fall to the ground, My eyes full of tears, My heart breaking, Underneath ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: The Little Things.[[accepting]]
Name: Sonnett Johnson Age: 15 Class:Middle Gender:female Appearance: She is tall and thin. Blond hair and pretty blue eyes. She is somewhat pale. [/img] Personality: She is a social butterfly, ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Rain
Hey Authorgirl! I see you're new here, welcome! (: So, I'll just do a quick review since this piece is short. Bravo! You did some things really well with this ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: One
I wrote this after the Tsunami in Japan, may all the deceased rest in peace and let's help those who need us now. A shaking brings us to our knees, ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Help Me Remember
I have fallen to my knees My face covered in tears Hardly able to breathe, So many times. I ask for Thy comfort, To feel Thy love. And you are ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Putting lyrics to music?
So...I don't know if any of you know, but I wrote a poem that I changed into lyrics. But I fail at writing actual music xD I seriously can't even ...
Feb 16, 2011
