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Re: In The Forests of the Night
I LOVE this book, not to mention the author. I think this is a really good book, too short though and too bad there was no sequel. I must have ...
Apr 19, 2007 -
Re: You're Beautiful
That was good, I liked it very much. It had descriptions and it was simple (in a good way). Missing a few quotation marks here and there, but that can ...
Apr 13, 2007 -
Re: Nothing Shows
This was good!! There was emotion and description and it was great! Very sad, though. It was simple and good. I hope there's more. *Foreseer*
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: Somewhere Only We Know
Well, I really like this. It displays emotion, and everything really well. Props for that! Maybe if there could be a space in between paragraphs, but hey it's good. Can't ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: The Morning Colors
For some reason this poem calmed me down and relaxed me. I don't know if it's supposed to do that. :D I liked the way you used the words and ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: Shadowstalker
Welcome to YWS, ShadowStalker!! If you have any questions feel free to ask anyone, since everyone's soo nice. See you around, Foreseer
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: Hi!
Hey Merlin!
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: hi!
Hey Brandi!! I'm Miriam or Foreseer! :D Welcome to YWS!! As you may already know, if you need help, everyone is willing to help. Everyone's soo nice. Glad to have ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: Book...a very good book...
I LOVE the Daughters of the Moon series!! I still haven't gotten around to buying any though. :cry: But that's going to change!! I've read one book from Sarah Dessen, ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: The Crucible
Hey, I read The Crucible , for an English assignment. I thought it was okay, the book was okay. The plot was well thought out as well as the characters ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: Eragon
Well, I don't know about you guys, but I really liked Eragon and Eldest. Though the movie...let's not go there. I have to say though, when I was reading both ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: Choices
Very interesting, the good way, of course. The rhythm flows well, but it kind of rushes here and there. A few grammar mistakes, but that can be fixed. I like ...
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: Gone
Well, this is the secnd piece I've read from you and I have to say...I love it! I believe you're very talented, so don't be afraid to continue writing. Once ...
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: No Title, agian!
Hey, hey, I like this poem. I think it's great! The flow of the words and the rhythm was, I hesitate to say, perfect. Liked the way you ended the ...
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: Blood in Her Wine
I like your story, it's very interesting (the good way, of course). The first few lines, in the first paragraph, grabbed my attention right away, so that's good. I thought ...
Apr 10, 2007
