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Ooh, nice. Pretty cool poem, and mysterious too. I don't if you were aiming for that too but I thought it was. Okay, first things first. The word usage. Awesome ...

Well, I certainly liked it. I felt it had a rhythm in it that made it easy to follow but unpredictable, as in it could change gradually. (Not sure if ...

Well, I liked the book and at the same time I was like "woah!" I will honestly say that I was about to quit reading it 'cause it got a ...

Oooh, I have! :smt006 I've read all three of them and I must say the last one left me a little. . .what's the word. Anyway, I can't think of ...

That was a short one but I really thought for a second there that it was all coming to an end. It almost sounded like Emily is sinking into depression, ...

Well, I can say I've seen improvement. I think you got a little bit better at writing from a girl's prespective but there's still room for improvement there. More details ...

Definately got me interested from the first paragraph. Though, it felt like I had just walked in during the middle of a book, if you know what I mean. A ...

Well...hard work paid off. I think you did a good job, so far you haven't gone that overboard with the girly stuff. I liked to hear a bit more from ...

What do you mean Jason died? I gotta say the ending was really sad, at least to me it was. Poor girl. This story does have potential, maybe you could ...

Definately cute! I liked it a lot! It was pretty funny in some parts and that was good. Art guys are definately the best, as well as mysterious and quiet.(Two ...

Interesting...I loved it! It was descriptive enough to actually be able to form a visual image in your head and 'see' the stuff going on. The first few sentences definately ...

Thanks for reviewing! All suggestions are welcome! This definately helps me. *~*Foreseer*~*

Forever All the colors fade away, it has come at last to be the day; I fall. Sight and sound slip afar, a new darkness like a scar; holds. Present ...

From the very first line you caught my attention. I loved it! It was very well rhymed and put in simple words that it can deliver a message, or just ...

I thought this was brilliant! When I was reading it it sounded so... deep and serene. Good descriptions and use of words, really captivating. I really liked the whole poem. ...