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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Sunset in Wonderland

    Thank you!!! I%u2019ll definitely look into making the ending more clear, I think there%u2019s a lot that goes unexplained, unfortunately! Thanks again!

    Jun 14, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Sunset in Wonderland

    Oh my gosh, I just realized my response came out a little weird! That might just be because I%u2019m on mobile. I apologize!

    Jun 14, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Sunset in Wonderland

    Thank you so much for the suggestions!! I definitely feel like the ending has a different, abrupt change in tone/mood that I%u2019ll need to look into! Honestly now I%u2019m wondering ...

    Jun 14, 2021


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