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What an ending! I like that a lot, it would be great in a childrens book. one typo [quote]All the humans concerned ere extatic[/quote] ere is were i would think, ...

This is like a bed time story and i enjoyed reading it, "cute" does seem to sum it up fairly well, looking forward to reading the next one One typo ...

No, i dont think i have met a Sam on here yet

Thanks for the advice Eloere, that really helps, i've been a bit high strung lately so im sorry as well. Friends now? PS - It might be, wait for the ...

I did not honestly mean to be patronising, i did think it was very good and i said i dont think its bad for an 11 year old because i ...

I think you said all I was going to point out, so im not going to say it all again, but its a good start honestly, a few typos, could ...

I cant get the Italics to work!! don't worry about being harsh with it, its only a first draft that i threw together, blasted italics.

Any comments on this would be nice, feel free to critise to your hearts content, its just a rough idea i had and thought i'd throw it into the air ...