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Jeans and a blue v-neck top and a red fleece type thing because im cold.

hospital food

It's big, and the colour of snow Do you like the drink "Lilt?"

Needles (to poke with)

The colour of darkness Do you have any credit on your phone?

Thanks for the advice folks. I'll sort it out to make it less confudling. Thanks again

I've changed the "he" to "my stepfather" that should sort it. I've never read a book called "a child called it" who wrote it?

??? the headmaster didn't kill anybody, he simply got Johnny refered to Social Services and his stepfather went to jail. No one died.

Hate is a very strong emotion when it’s flowing through your veins. I know hate, like some people despise spiders or wasps, I despise him. He is out at the ...

Where do i start? -People (men & women) who wear their shirt collars turned up. -Dell Keyboards - sticky -People who leave their phone on loud in library's and churches ...

Interesting, i like the layout, builds the suspense well. Couple of things, there's a few typo's that broke the flow once i was reading it, mouth and had hand? head? ...

OK, English homework done Nothing wrong with the idea or the story as far as i can tell, flows really well, but something needs to happen, as Griffin said or ...

blue dressing gown and PJ's (just had a shower)

shoulder

Love is happiness, when you look at the person you love and feel suddenly all that much better just by looking at him