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I am a rock person - all rock Status Quo - Deep Purple - Rainbow - Greenday - Iggy Pop - Queen (I cant believe no one else has mentioned ...

Vampires Elves or Humans?

Now theres a good bit of writing. It's well written, just a few mistakes. [quote]baseball capsand untying shoelaces[/quote] Space inbetween "caps and" [quote]get people lost, Lure [/quote] No capital

I think Eloere caught all the major errors. You dont need all the captial sentances, start all sentances on a new line and take out the capitals. Check over punctuation ...

Hey Im the Fool, welcome to YWC. Enjoy your time with us, it may get a little strange later along the line.... Anyway, PM me if you need anything.

Hey, I'm the Fool, i used to be an TYWC as well, as the Fool, naturally, since i feel a fool more often than i act one.... which is a ...

Well this story is certainly going somewhere, and its going a break-neck speed. I liked it, the story was interesting, i could get to like Wyes the more i get ...

an eggshell blue's my favourite colour I also like wearing black and white together in my Jester clothes, they are my colours when im making people laugh. Blue rocks though

Bugs all the way Birthdays or Christmas?

Paragraphs should be seperated into clear lines to make it easier to read. Break your sentances up, the first sentance is about 3 lines in a world processor, break it ...

Hee hee, that was funny

No, i dont think i have met a Sam on here yet

Well, it depends what you want to read, eg - fantasy or fiction or horror ect, Last summer i read the Ryan verse series by Tom Clancy, thats about 12 ...

Hey, that looks just like mine, i wonder what she's listening to? What were you thinking last time you bought a calender?

Thanks for the advice Eloere, that really helps, i've been a bit high strung lately so im sorry as well. Friends now? PS - It might be, wait for the ...