Folius

Yay! Chapter 5 is out. :D So now at least we're getting into the story. I am planning the next chapter to have a little more explanation on what the ...

Hello there! So, I find this story quite interesting, though I'm not sure where the plot is going. XD Perhaps it's developed later on in the story? But never mind ...

Wonderful job! Most of the errors I spotted have already been mentioned by dasiamari, and I'm not that much a poet, so I hope you understand. I love the way ...

Finally I'm posting the next addition to the story. It took me long enough. =/ With the upcoming examination and the influx of homework, I'm left with little time to ...

I believe you have achieved in making this story more mysterious with the prologue. Though I believe there are some fragments that could be changed to become proper sentences, though ...

Chapter 3 is finally out... After a long and troubling time thinking of how I should write this chapter, I finally did it. :D Oh, and I daresay that the ...

Alright. A short story this time. Samp gave me the inspiration. I told him to give me a romance/tragedy story, he gave me six words. I'm not that good in ...

Very nicely written. I could immediately understand the story from this few lines. The starting paragraph was a great hook. It made me question what you meant when you said, ...

A wonderful short story, I feel. I could sense the emotions that the man had, though I felt that it was not expressed fully. There are not many errors, as ...

Hello again! I know it's been awhile since the first chapter. And I feel that this chapter did not really come out that nicely as I was rushing to meet ...

The story was very nice. I like the plot so far. Though, there are some things that I need to tell you, in my opinion. Everything went well, though at ...

Alright, so this is my first story that is on this site. =D It was done with the help of ScarlettFire, Samp as well as LavenderBlue. So credits to them, ...

Oh hello Sea, if I may call you that. And yeah, Shawn is a nice name, though it is pretty common in my country. :D Oh and I have indeed ...

Let's see...: The blade was inches from me.

Hello Scar, as well as SubjectBlue! Thanks for the warm welcome, and I'm sure I'll like it here, if not I'll try to. XD I will probably start writing my ...