FlyingInEbony

Alright-y, I'll start working on this piece right away! Thank you, Carly! Your reviews are always so... substantial. Just sayin'... :smt081

Hey, Joanne! Welcome to YWS, I hope you'll like it here! I'm Chisel, nice to meet you! I've read your article, and I somewhat agree with you. Personally, I do ...

Hi Ruin! I read your poem, and I really, really liked it. The concept is something simple, but your structure is beyond complex (in a good way)! I'm thinking that ...

Hi, guys. I've written this "expository essay" recently for my English class, and I went a little bit farther than the topic has asked, but I did kind of bring ...

I generally like to read classic novels and such, but by force (e.g. my English class), I was able to read two books which I most certainly disliked. Those were ...

We were sitting in the parking lot behind my apartment building in his black Ford pickup truck. That day's counseling session hadn't been about how to handle an argument, or ...

Thank you very much, Dreamy! I'll be sure to pay attention to your works too, I have a feeling they are really good! :P

Hi everyone! This poem tells the story of an unidentified persona, who immigrated to another country; now he is returning to his homeland and dealing with his past and the ...

It’s against the rules. But, I would take out this comma, it doesn't flow right when you pronounce the sentence. Dad has to be home for I would put something ...

Thanks for your tip, you've helped me realize a great deal! When I first presented this story, nobody gave me any suggestions on how this story was seen according to ...

Sorry if this is too angst-y, depressing, whiny or whatever. I don't like this piece of work either. :mrgreen: What's in a name? - William Shakespeare All truth passes through ...

Hi! I liked your story, it was captivating. Kind of grotesque with your vivid descriptions. :D I agree with most of the reviews that talk about grammar, punctuation, capitalization and ...

This story is nicely written, good job. I liked the imagery you created when describing the setting, it makes sense that an old house would have a wooden staircase and ...

Nice to meet you all! :smt114 Hi Hope! I would say that good music is something with lyrics, which evoke deep emotion through presentation. I don't know a lot of ...

Hi RedSmiles! I'll have to see your short stories, I bet they're really good! See you around the forum! :smt023