FlyingInEbony

Hey, Shubhi! :D I liked your story, it's new! I just wanted to point out that your prologue is a little rushed because your story starts out with a climax ...

The most difficult challenge for me is working on my style of writing and developing the characters and the plot the way I want for them to appear to my ...

Hi, Valentine! Would you please review this for me? Pretty please? I don't mind harshness. :) It's about a boy in Nazi Germany writing to a local newspaper about his ...

Hey, KatTrain! Nice to meet you, I'm Chisel! :D First of all, I would like to say that this poem is very original. When I first read it, the setting ...

Hi, Classy! I would absolutely love if you could review this for me... Please? Pretty please? With sugar and a cherry on top? It's in the Other Fiction forum. The ...

Hello, Jordrake! Welcome to YWS! Let's get started on your piece... I'm currently working on my critiquing skills. :) Your story is promising; I liked quite a few things in ...

Hi guys. I was asked in this essay to explain a couple of major themes in the play Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare. This is all I've got. Please ...

I'm so glad you liked my poem! This certainly gives me inspiration to write new things, thanks for reviewing. :wink: By the way, welcome to YWS, Deane! Hope you'll like ...

I have no idea what you'll think of this piece. As usual, I have retrieved the inspiration for this from a dream, actually, exactly like my dream. :smt028 My mind ...

Hello! I have a little essay here, but the topics discussed in it are kind of controversial. So, when skimming this, don't get an impression that these are my personal ...

Wow, that was fast! Thank you very much, TenYo! I'll try to change my grammar and sentence structure, your thoughts made sense. And you just made my day! :P

Hello, YWS-ers! I'm not too big on writing poems, but sometimes I try. Tell me what you think of this. This poem was based on a dream. :smt104 The sea ...

Hi Snoink! I've read over your piece (no kidding), and I just love your creativity! :smt003 Not only you changed the outcome of your usual-type fairy tale, it was still ...

Nice, Kamas! I didn't think anybody could top me... :smt118 Aspiring, nice to meet you, I'm Chisel!

Hi Elinor! I've been a member of YWS for only one and half months, so I still can be considered a newbie, but I've had my share of memories... For ...