FlyingInEbony

Why yes, as a matter of fact, I'm listening to the soundtrack of "Amelie" right now...

Fable glistens on your lips, strangely troubled, young as fire, sacrificed unto desire; it unrests with dealt forbearance, deathly spirit, happy vengeance, and forgiveness of the past, - after all, ...

I'm in love with this poem. It's simply beautiful - the way you put everything together, every detail enamored with a metaphor or a simile, from the title until the ...

Hi, Angel! :) You have great expression in this poem. Very nice imagery, light, and, at the same time, evident. I would suggest, however, to place punctuation marks at the ...

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-- Judgment is born with silence, expression bears familiarity, and knowledge sleeps around with faith, providing speculation based on morality. -- Blind people can see the color of your skin: ...

I agree with you on punctuation and page breaks. These make it easier to understand the piece through organization. Do you have any suggestions on the content? Originally I was ...

Hi, Princess! Pretty nice haikus. My favorite line was probably in the last stanza - "life eternal, shine forever". All of these sound beautiful, they make up a lovely story. ...

The day is over. Illusions are brought To the forlorn security That my past throngs Until the day is over. The sun is unseen, And sleep is my death 'Till ...

Cannibal, thanks for reviewing! I agree, this isn't really a short story, but it's not a poem, script, or fantasy, action, adventure, romance fiction... So I just picked one. I ...

This short story (more like a paragraph, you would agree) is written in a narrative, reflective format, where the life of a teenager is described; its highs and lows; emphasis ...

This is a really sad topic, I wanted to show the intimacy between the mother and the son because when we hear bad news on the television or even on ...

Haven't been on for a while! :oops: So sorry. :( This short poem is about a conversation between a mother and a son, who had been trapped under a collapsed ...

Hello, Leesa! Welcome to YWS, I really hope that you'll enjoy the stay here! I know I'm VERY HAPPY to be here! :smt081 Poke around, see what you'll find here... ...

WOW! This was really beautiful! You have a talent in poetry... Your piece is flowing so easily! It doesn't make the reader feel as if you strained to make out ...