Flower~Child

I love this and I can relate to this alot. I can't really review what I like so I will leave it at that!

The Battle of Love and Hatred (it's not finished) It was a bright sunny day in Konoha. There was a young girl walking down the street. She looked to be ...

I couldn't tell much about the characters because you picked such a late chapter. Anyway I do like this alot. I think this would make a wonderful book. The only ...

Yeah I guess, but I'd rather be stupid and love books than be smart and hate them all haha.

I love this. I have so many emo friends like that it's crazy! Anyway I can't really review what I like. Keep Writing -Flower-

Maybe but I see errors in everything now a days.

I don't think light would loose his temper like that. It just isn't him.

I want Violet to get with the guy triplet.

It looks like a fairy from inkheart.

The guy I drew has a mask on just saying haah. Anyway yeah I get what your saying and I will try it.

Very true, but every book has errors, and it would take a advanced writer to realize it.

I do like this, I think it is really good. I agree with the person above though about the repetition.

Hmmmm I have had trouble picturing characters. I pictured Jasper with dark hair, and emmett with blond he he. Yeah I think there are errors, but every book has them.

Ok, this is not my favorite piece of work. I like how you got the body structure of the lion, but the background is kinda plain. Also do lions have ...

I like this, it would look better with a little bit of color and shading, but besides that it's good. There are a couple of errors but every drawing has ...