Flower~Child

I am going to make this a little bit shorter on the lines and then I will review it ok. It’s so odd to think home is no longer where ...

I think that you need to put this into better stanza's or nobody is going to review this. Once you do let me know. -Flower-

I love this! I love the rhyme sceme used in it, and all the emotion you put into it. I don't see anything that I don't like in it. So ...

Thanks! And I love your poem BowLove it is really pretty! Anyway this is by far my favorite as well, and I don't know why.

Ok I do like this, but I think it might need a little work. Or a lot depending on what you say. I was so in love, with your beautiful ...

Thank you for all the reviews, I really appreciate it. Anyway I don't know what lines would look better in it. I could give a story or something. I can ...

The end is near I hear it now, like a clock Tick Tock All the time, on this earth spent, for nothing at all. Tick Tock So here is the ...

I don't like the look of the face on this one. The ears are to big, and don't curve enough. The eye looks like need more shape to them. Oh, ...

I think that this picture is good, but just the same I am going to review it. First of all I think that the wolf is to elevated. If it ...

Um OK, well first of all are you trying to get the point across that good and evil are both equal? Anyway, first of all when you said Holy Bible, ...

I like this alot more than the fat wolf. The only thing that I can really critic you on is the fact that the eyebrow is kinda weird. Maybe cat ...

Who was being rude? You didn't specify. Anyway I guess that I am the second person since it has the llama thing, or maybe I was the one being the ...

I am gonna review because well thats what I am here for. First of all, is this supposed to be a wolf? It looks sorta like a llama hehe. Ok, ...

Finally I read the third one, but I didn't like it as much as inkspell. I cried when dustfinger died, but when they brought him back I was so happy.

Thank y'all, and what did I comment that you didn't like? Oh and I did misspell that ah I will go back and fix it.