Flower~Child

Ok review time! I love how this flows! It's amazing. The only thing that I see is that you misspelled passing, anniversary, tomorrow, particularly, and themselves is one word. Well, ...

I really like all the emotion in this. I also like how you go back to the swings in this. It just makes it so much better.

O, review time, but I am going to start off on what I like. (and I never do that) I love how you fixed the paws. They look like wolf ...

O my gosh I just figured it out! Now I get it and like it alot more!

I like this alot. It just seems kind of jumpy to me. It goes from what you want to the ride of your life. Also there is no punctuation in ...

Ok, review time, and beware haha I am mad that I was almost finished with this review and it erased grrr. Anyway first of all I have no idea who ...

Ok, review time. I don't know how good this will be, but here we go. I read through it and wondered what you meant by this poem. I gave it ...

Haha thanks June, but I can't really draw ships. I can imitate, but I could never have my own style to it.

Um, ok, wow. I don't think I could review this as poetry, but I will try. First of all there is no punctuation. There needs to be some in the ...

Ok, so I so totally went back and read this again and I get it. So yeah some people don't know pain like others do and they take it way ...

Ok I so reviewed this before and it didn't post. Anyway the only thing that I see that is wrong with this poem is the line that says, It's funny ...

Ok, review time. First of all it keeps rhyme at times, and then it leaves. I like the last two lines of this poem the best. I don't think that ...

I like the first one, I don't get the file thing, it sounds like the joker haha.

Ok this won't be much of a review, but here I go. Like I have said before n & symbol, it ruins it when I am reading such beautiful work. ...

Ok review time. First of all I love the rhyme sceme here. It is amazing, but like lyrical_sunshine said it does break at that one point. I don't get what ...