Flower~Child

I like this. I can't quite understand it, but I do like it.

Thank you so much for your review. I will try and do better in the future.

Ok, I wanted to wait until I could sit down and review each piece. So here I go! 1. The heart is to solid. The ribbon just kinda stands there ...

Ummm I have lots so I will just name them all. 1.Death Note 2.Blood Plus 3.Vampire Knight 4.Naruto (even though the plot changed for the worst :() 5.Bleach (even though ...

Did she? I didn't know all I saw was her mourning. Her life was cut in half twice though so she wouldn't have lasted much longer anyway. Who was MAtt ...

Just the same he made life a big game. He didn't have rules or anything. If he took a human life it was just a pawn out of the way ...

He was very briliant, but it was very sad when he lost it. I hated Near! He found life a game, and when a another Kira came out he wouldn't ...

Ok, review time. One thing I noticed is that his neck doesn't go in it shoots out. If you pulled it in a little it would look better. The next ...

This is lovely, but still I must review. One thing I see is the teeth look a little weird. The only other thing I see is that the hair looks ...

Light didn't kill Misa HuggyBear, she was the only good one alive in the end. Even if she was a stupid blonde idiot! I loved light I cried when he ...

I think the rhyming in this is to forced. Poetry doesn't have to have rhyme. That's your choice though...oh well that's all I can think of for the time being.

I see some errors, but I am going to go from book point of view. Nico isn't talkative. He is dark and mean. Percy and Annabeth wouldn't be holding hands ...

Ok, review time. First of all the face is way to round. It needs shape. If you pull the chin inward when you come to it will give that effect. ...

I like this. I think that at first it made no sense because of your title. You were talking about all of these colors when she can't see? Then you ...