Flower~Child

Ok review time. I do really like this a lot. First, her neck is a bit long. Second, her hair is just kind of all over the place. Third, she ...

Ok review time. I love the car. It looks just like the real thing. The only thing is that it is smudged a little bit. The crane took me a ...

Ok I am going to go piece by piece on this one. Or at least try to. First Part. I like this, and I like how it goes down to ...

Ok I am going to go piece by piece on this one. Or at least try to. First Part. I like this, and I like how it goes down to ...

Thank you so much for the review. I am having trouble in those area's but I am trying! Thanks again! -Flower-

Thank you so much for the review. I am having trouble in those area's but I am trying! Thanks again! -Flower-

Ok review time. First of all I love this. It is a really good idea for a story, but whose parent's are like that? (Anyway just going to go through ...

Ok review time. First of all I love this. It is a really good idea for a story, but whose parent's are like that? (Anyway just going to go through ...

Review time! Ok here we go. *** Chapter 1- A Lovely Nightmare Daniel swept in from behind and wrapped his arms around my waist.  I jumped, but he seemed highly ...

Review time! Ok here we go. *** Chapter 1- A Lovely Nightmare Daniel swept in from behind and wrapped his arms around my waist.  I jumped, but he seemed highly ...

Review time! Ok here we go. *** Chapter 1- A Lovely Nightmare Daniel swept in from behind and wrapped his arms around my waist.  I jumped, but he seemed highly ...

I like the repetition of the Beach, but shouldn't it be the waves since that is what you are talking about. I get that the place is the beach but ...

This is amazing! I wish I could write like that. You go from one line to the next and it all flows. Keep Writing -Flower-

Umm what is it? I guess you can call everything art, but I really don't know how to review this.

Ok, well to be honest all of the words being mixed up annoys me. I really have to look at some of the words to understand them. I do like ...