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Re: You Were
Thank you for the review. I will take your advise on that. I don't think poetry is my stong suit as you can tell.
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: You Were
You were the one I first loved. You were the one I first dreamed of. You were the one who made it feel right. You were the one who held ...
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: Tale of a suicide
Alright review time. I love this, it is so sad but so real. I see a lot of typo's though. I think if you fix them it will be a ...
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: My first attempt at photography
Thanks foxfire, and what do you mean by how did you get the filter? Oh and here is the sky :)
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: M'i Coraz'on
Ok, review time. I like this, but it seems to be a little rushed. I think that if you make it a little slower, and capture more of the feelings ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: Crying Over You
Ok, review time. I like this a lot. I get the feeling of it, and you make it feel real. Some of the lines don't flow very well though. Besides ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: My first attempt at photography
Thank you for the reviews. I would go back and take the picture again, but those hay things are gone. Anyway here is my next picture in sepia as requested.
Aug 25, 2009 -
Re: My first attempt at photography
Alright I am gonna make this my photography thread so here we go. What do you think??
Aug 24, 2009 -
Re: Acting
I like the simpicity in this, but I do think that you left out part of the story. You see that the person is really upset about something, but what? ...
Aug 24, 2009 -
Re: red light
I like this, I don't quite understand it but I like it. I don't get the point of it being red, wouldn't it be better in black or something like ...
Aug 24, 2009 -
Re: drawing of my main character
It's way to big make it smaller please.
Aug 9, 2009 -
Re: My first attempt at photography
Thank you for the reviews. :) That is a lot of help because I don't even know how to do photography haha. I took those pictures with my digital camera ...
Aug 9, 2009 -
Re: Rate the country above you
10/10 the dark side has cookies!
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