Flower~Child

He is really kind of annoying haha the way he thinks he is better than everybody.

Ok, so this is just a joke song haha. I say I'm a winner but I'm really not I'm really a loser, and I smoke pot. They say crack is ...

Very discriptive, I think you could make it more interesting and not as slow though.

I like this, I think it could flow better though, and it could give more imaginary. You should make it more alive, why do you want the person to be ...

7/10

I love this, it is amazing, sure it could flow better but it is original and I love it.

Om here it is newly edited.

I like this and it was stong to me until the last line. I don't think the last line ties in with this. Otherwise great dob.

Ok, review time. The hood of the thing is a little stiff. It doesn't fall onto her head if you know what I am saying. Also on the hood wear ...

I was trying to focus on the ripples but waster was dripping everywhere and I didn't know when they would hit, but I tried :). As for the camara it ...

Ok I thought this was cool give me your input.

Thank you silented :) when I work on it I will send you a better copy.

Thank you it was just something that came off the top of my head. It does need to be longer and I might work on it later.

I look to the future, I shy away from the past, why can't I just live in the present for it will never last.