Flower~Child

Ok, I see what you were trying to do with the axe. Her arms are to thick for that though, they should be thinner and her shoulders should be the ...

I really like this. I feel the emotion that you are sharing through this and it is amazing to me how wonderful this is. I love it keep writing. -Flower-

I love these, the last one is a little blurry, maybe that was the intention, but anyway they are wonderful!

Ok, I think that the beggining wasn't as good as the end. It got stronger but the rhyme sceme wasn't very good. Work on that and it would be very ...

Ok, review time haha. I to am a Christian and we have no problem with dating, or kissing, and a true friend wouldn't say break up with him or I'm ...

I agree with the other review, but I really like this. I think that it was a little long and most readers wont read something that is this long because ...

I think I must be confused, but as far as poetry goes let me review. I think that it rymed at first but it lost that in like the third ...

Thank you June I will do. I will work on this later today if I have the time.

I really like all of the one's after the first wolf. I realy didn't like it for some reason. The eyes were too far apart, and the eyes were going ...

I think that it seemed to happy for what you wrote after it. To bright for my taste, but as for the writing I am all to familiar with it. ...

I really like this. I think that if you made the wings higher it would be better though. They just kind of sit here as they are.

I really like this, but I have liked others better. Not to be the mean reviewer haha. It got stronger as it went on and I liked that but in ...

I think that this is very interesting and original. I don't know how you would want me to review it because it's your own original design. I think on the ...

To reduce the size go to :))