Flower~Child

I have a poem please?

The pieces fit together, better than a rhymes. They mix perfectly like a lyric with it's song. Yet no rhyme can hold it's rhythm, nor a lyric hold it's tune. ...

Ok, since you have generously commented on two of my poems, I believe I owe you a review. Forgive me if my review is choppy, but I am going to ...

Shaking, thoughts racing teeth clenched voices raising. (anger) Screaming louder insults splatter hurt rings louder, as tears dabble. (down my cheek) Voices lower footsteps glower (worse than an angry

Please?

Please?

The line of reality stretches it's black streams of darkness over me. It carrasses my mind inserting memories telling me things. It told me that my childhood was way to ...

What is happening in this poem is: The girl is dating this guy and her dreams are flooded with the memories of what he does every night, which is to ...

Well Classy I'm finally here as promised like a month ago. I see you have some very nice reviews, so I don't really have much to comment on. I really ...

Edited Eh, well I seem to have missplaced my quote button so I am going to have to do this by hand. My name is Flow by the way (shakes ...

Before I begin I know this probably wont' be good because it is indeed just my emotions splayed on a page. I thought I would get it out there though. ...

Hm I shall join this game........ I got nothing.

I have a poem if you don't mind. Short and sweet.

Hello my darling. Will you review my poem?

Feelings are like ....political leaders. (humorous) You never know what they will make you do. (Including yourself) They can make you pay money. (Like taxes) They make you say untrue ...