Flower~Child

I really like this. I think that one thing you could do to make it better is at the part where is says from loss, from hear, etc....I think that ...

I think that it could have been better. It wasn't bad, but some of the words you used could have been replaced and made it sound better. I think that ...

I really like this poem. I was going to comment earlier, but I had to go to school. There isn't anything that I don't like about it really. Keep Writing ...

I really like these. They look like you would find them in a book. So maybe now you should write a book about aliens and put these in it haha. ...

Thank you for the reviews and I will emmylou.

Well Yesterday I went to my granny's to watch the little kids hunt eggs, when they were hunting them they had to find 12. They counted the eggs and my ...

O_O make it go away.....

This really confused me like Quetseli said above. The first thing that I thought about was cancer, I don't know why haha. The last line confused me to. Maybe it ...

She needs a thumb.

This just seems like a doodle to me. I think that the lines need to be darker and more defined. Shading would be a must to make it look really ...

I like the one with the building in the back better than without it. My favorite though is the pen and the red ink or blood or whatever it is. ...

I don't see what you mean by the killing him thing...but oh well. I think that you could do without the repition of and I remember all the time but ...

I am not going to go out into dead out reivew, because I am tired. Anyway the thing I wanted to comment on was that his head on the upper ...

It is supposed to be bird flies by. Haha with that let me introduce myself, I am Flower, or whatever you would like to call me is fine. It think ...

OK, so I was bored and thought I would make something good out of it so here it is. Tears stain my face as sleep finally calls me, it whispers ...