Flower~Child

[quote="mackenzie"] Mother You have never seen my tears, Not how I cry, anyway I cry not of love or loss, But for the world, For the peril, The evil, Everything ...

I really like this there isn't much bad that I could say about this. It is really descriptive, and it has a nice smooth flow. I really like this. Keep ...

Like Elinor above I found this to be another bland love story. I also like the imagery but that's about it. I think that you should make it a story, ...

Flowerdy shirt (can you imagine by my name) Skinny Jeans, a black jacket, and black shoes....

Ok, review time haha, my name is flower and I guess you know why I'm here. I unlike the others felt no emotion in this. You hear these so much ...

Ok Flower here to review. One thing that I noticed that you kept doing was switching from past to present alot. I think that you should stick with one. I ...

I am not going to bother with the little things because they have been taken care of. I think that I like this, but I think that there should be ...

Ok, just like the others I like this but it could use a good review. First of all where the arm conects on the left side, it is to dark ...

Thank you Kamas, I know it's not really original so I will get back to thinking. I had to read your review again because the first time it just kinda ...

Haha

I like this, but you can't really review something like this. Anyway so just keep it up it's really cool. -Flower-

Like Mizzle I don't like the first one I like the second one a lot though. If you want advise on how to fix the first one pm me and ...

Ok so this is really weird and I was bored so ya.

Im straight but Megan Fox

I like it ok 7/10