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Re: Let Me Show You
I like this except for the fact that it makes me kind of mad haha. My friend is living this right now and it annoys me that she likes the ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Angelic Heart
I really like this. The only thing I have to say is like above the shading isn't very good. It's very rushed which makes the picture look bad. Also it ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Edited version of The Monster has Escaped (now Schitzo)
Thank you for the reviews, I will work on shortening it.
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Tired
I really like this I can relate to how you feel. The first three lines confused me, but other than that it was amazing. Pm me if you write anymore.
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Edited version of The Monster has Escaped (now Schitzo)
Ok so I got really bored in English and well this is what happened. The monster shrieks inside my head it wasnts to escape and be free, but I won't ...
Apr 29, 2010 -
Re: lips to my pain
I really like this. I love poetry that rhymes, and you don't really see it much, and if you do it's not good. That said yours was amazing! I gave ...
Apr 29, 2010 -
Re: - Ryuzaki -
I tried to made my eyes hurt, and all it did was make it blurry haha. Anyway this isn't that bad. He looks kind of childish in this though. I ...
Apr 29, 2010 -
Re: I'll Always Love You, but why ?
I really just scanned over this, because it's just a basic O my goodness I love you, and there isn't anything new to it. You only use imagery in one ...
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: Mushroom, Mushroom!
I love these,there isn't much I can say about any of them, but the one before the last one really doesn'tlook like a shroom it looks like a tree. -Flower-
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: Sasuke (anime)
Thank you for the reviews. Like Winter said above it is sharingan so it's supposed to look llike that. I had to totally make it up as I went along ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: When I Dream
I think that this was a very simple poem. It really needs more color and imagery, and a story. You really just jumped from subject to subject and made it ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: all i can write about is robots
I really like this, the title didn't really jump out at me though. My favorite part of this was the second what would you call it....paragraph thing haha....stanza thing. Anyway ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Sasuke (anime)
Ok, it looks better in real life, but here it is.
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Take Me. (Anime)
When I saw anime in the title I was like, that is where I am freakin going haha! I really like their faces. Like whoever above said the eyes are ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: What Did You Eat Last?
I ate ribs and a roll, 2 taco's, and pickles...
Apr 15, 2010
