Flower~Child

Hello there my friend, I'm flower and I will be your reviewer for today! First off this is nice for just looking into your imagination, it's more than I could ...

I like this, it is so simple, and very sweet. I really don't know how to review haiku's so sorry haha. Just wanted to let you know I like the ...

Ok, so I am going to a quick review I might edit it later. First of all I think on the eyes that you made them to light. He looks ...

The last thing that I dreamed was that I was having my 16th B-day party in a really weird house. I had just finished straightening my hair, and then for ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! I'm Flower~Child or flower like everyone else calls me. Write more about yourself, and let me know if you need anything, I would be more ...

To be really honest this really bored me. You seem to have tried with description but the words you used are boring. One of the things that I wondered was ...

Today's the day I start my life All over again once more. Today I find a better cause That's more worth fighting for. - Today's the day I give up ...

I liked the begining, but toward the end it just seems like you are shoving a person away. It turns from emotion to nothing. Most poems go like let me ...

This is my first semi romantic poem. It isn't that great, but tell me what I can do to make it better. You turned and looked into my eyes. I ...

I liked this, excepted for the forcing of old language. I also think that you really didn't get to the point until halfway through. So the first part wasn't all ...

I like this, but I really coudn't figure out what she was. It may just be me, but I feel a lack of story behind it. I think that if ...

I really like this poem. The one thing that I wanted to comment on the most was the title didn't jumped out at me. I don't know why but it ...

The first thing that I thought of when I clicked on this poem is that the title doesn't catch my attention. I think you need something that jumps out there. ...

All I can see right now is the repition of kill me slowely. I don't think you need to use this so much in the poem. I also thing that ...

I really like the emotion of this. I think that you have a lot of reitition in it though. I think that you could change it to be more new ...