Flower~Child

Will you review this for me? It's romance, well the begining of it.

Will you review this for me?

When I read this I fell in love with it. It felt as if you were writing a poem for my life at the moment. I guess it's because I ...

I liked it, but like ziggie said above it is hard to get the picture of what you are talking about. The mental image I got was bird, because of ...

Hello there, I'm flower and I am just going to tell you what I thought of this as I read it. I think this is a lovely poem full of ...

I have a poem called "My Will." Have at it if you want, it's under dramatic poetry.

Ah well today me and some of my friends went around dancing to VBS songs that we had learned the week before. I am writing a story.....I dunno what else ...

Ok, so this is sort of a true story, but I am making it fake hehe. This is my first time writing something like this so I hope you like ...

Um English please?

Hello scifres and welcome to YWS, I am Flower and I will be your reviewer for today. After reading through this I just have a few things to point out: ...

Hello there I'm Flower and I will be reviewing for you today. Sorry in advance if I'm a bit snappy there is a huge fly on my screen and it's ...

I really like this poem. There isn't much I can criticize or anything, I think the punctuation was brilliant. I also like how it just seamlessly flows together. -Flower-

Hello Jeanette and welcome to YWS, I am Flower and will be reviewing for you today. I really liked this poem a lot. I felt the emotion in it, but ...

Alright Flower her for a review! The first thing that I noticed about this piece is that the head seems very squished on the lager cheetah. The reason I feel ...

When thy eyes touched mine For the very first time I knew it would be forever That we were meant to stay together And I had to keep my faith ...