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Re: One by One (chapter 1)
This is part of my novel I do believe I set it up this way. As for this chapter I will make it longer later. I didn't have time and ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: One by One (chapter 1)
Why does life matter? Staring at my ceiling has become a constant routine throughout my life. Always memorizing the patterns, mostly because they are never the same. I think of ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Regrets & Love
I am going to break out one of my reviews that has been long forgoten by the writing world for you today. To be completly honest love poems aren't my ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Fire to my Bones
Love kindles my bones but the fire that burns within cannot protect me from the cold. The empty streets of my past are walked by only me and occationaly the ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Dregan's Path Chapter 1: Trip
Ok, so I am here as requested my friend! I really did enjoy reading this. I wasn't to fond of you havn't the old timey time line for the first ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: I am the Apple
Thank you for the comments guys. Y'all do indeed have some dirty minds though haha. Take it however you see it I suppose.
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: I am the Apple
I am like an apple and you a knife. You slide into me carefully, placing yourself delicately in me. You smoothly carve into my core running circles through me. But ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: What I Am
Hello, Flow here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. Ok, so I agree with Perse on this one. I do think this poem was very powerful. It ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Needs new shoes.
I have a poem if you don't mind.
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Players
This is in a guys perspective by the way. A lonely street full of people. Eyes shifting searching for the next target. Blonde? Brunette? Red hair. Light colorful eyes, playful. ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: The Darkness of Happiness
I was just thinking of all the people that do stuff to deal with pain but they do it to be seen. It just gave me the idea to write ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: The Darkness of Happiness
Happiness, what is it to you? A silly little crush? That feeling that you get when you know your loved? What makes you smile? What makes your gut tie in ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: No Other Man
I read this piece and I completely related. You have so much emotion in this piece. I love the style you have. I like the long lines that you have ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: A Needle in the Haystack
Well, hello there my friend. The name of your poem attracted me because I just wrote a poem and used the phrase (A needle in a haystack) in it. So ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Pink my darling! Do you mind a poem?
Jan 24, 2011
