Flower~Child

Part five?

I have a romantic story called forgetting. I only have a link to part five though, so will you review it?

Ok, so I am really struggling to continue this. Everyone wants more drama in it and I am trying but it's not really working. I am going to finish up ...

Hello, I'm Flower and I will be your reviewer for today. Well… after school, I was with Nick. He leaned his head on my back as I sat between his ...

I really liked reading this, but it seemed more like poetry to me. In order for a story to be a story it must have some dialog. I think you ...

Ok, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening! Welcome to YWS by the way, I hope you are enjoying yourself here. -Softly, he whispered an answer ...

Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for today. A heart is like a rose, i t has to be handled with care, i t cant be jerked away ...

Alrighty, I'm Flower and I will be your reviewer for the day. Welcome to YWS by the way! I hope you are finding your way around easily. Also keep in ...

Done :))

Alrighty, Flower here as requested! Ok, here we go. I knew he’d gone before I awoke. This line seemed awkward to me. I think you should try and reword it. ...

I was clicking around on YWS and you title caught my attention. I figured it would be just another person bashing people's beliefs, but it's not. I can feel the ...

Will you review part two and part three of my story?

Ok guys, I am gonna try and jump into something new and exciting. I don't know how well this will go over, but I hope this ends well. It will ...

Hello, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. The only word I could think when I read your story was just wow. You have a very ...

Will you review this for me? It's under romantic short stories, and it's just the first chapter. You can't tell much about the story yet, but it will get better ...